I agree with sanjakova1024. But I give props to you this is a really hard song to sing.
On 04/13/2009 at 19:30
ey.. This song is not easy and when Rihanna singing that for her backvocals are big help! So .. I listen and I know it's hard song. At the 01:00 and in 2:10..your voice is a little bit crushed,isn't. You trying hard to sing excellent. You have sweety voice and I like it, but you maybe you must practice some parts, isn't? I know that no one is perfect, but if you will practice more that will be perfect! Listen my recordings and say what you think! Thank you!!